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« Reply #15 on: October 11, 2009, 09:17:41 AM »

~PAGE TWO~

T.O.C.
chapter 40- The play pt1
chapter 41- Intermission #1
chapter 42- The play pt2
chapter 43- Intermission #2
chapter 44- The play pt3
chapter 45- afterwords...
chapter 46- tell me tag
chapter 47- here, have some tea...
chapter 48-
chapter 49-
chapter 50-
chapter 51-
chapter 52-

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« Reply #16 on: February 02, 2010, 09:21:23 AM »

Chapter 40~ The Play pt1

A couple of weeks of intensive practicing go by and soon the play was to begin.
Teacher-"alright everyone, places! we're about to begin!"

[The curtains rise.]

Narrarator girl-"There once was a beautiful young maiden, who was known by all in the town. Not only was this maiden very beautiful, but she was also very kind"

[The stage lights up and you can see a girl in a pretty dress. It's lynn]

Lynn-"I would like to by a few of your lemons, how much to they cost?'

[the rest of the stage lights up, you see a fruit stand, and two people running the stand. As well as an entire market, including walking by pedestrians]

Man-"they cost two shillings each"
Lynn-"I'll take five"
The man hands her a bag on lemons and she hands him the money.
Lynn-"thank you"
Man-"Thanks for shopping, please come again"
Lynn-"will do"
Lynn smiles, then walks away. A lot of people passing greeted her.
You see a girl, hiding behind a corner, spying on Lynn.

[The stage lights go dark, leavingone spot light on the girl hiding behind a corner]

Rozu-"What's so great about her?!"
she comes out from the corner.
Rozu-"She is my rival. I'm in everyway better than her... Lynn...."

[the spot light goes out, the stage is dark]

Narrarator girl-"Yes, Everyone loves her... except that wicked girl.. Rozu"
"Rozu doesn't even have a single nice bone in her body, some say shes pure evil...."

[the stage lights go back on, the scenery has changed, its a small cottage, and in the rather large open window, you see lynn]

Narrarator-"She even makes attemps to get rid of Lynn"

You see rozu put on an ugly mask and cloak, and picks up a basket of poisoned apples.
Rozu goes over to lynn at the window.
Rozu-"won't you take an apple deary?"
Lynn-"Thank you, but, I'm going to have to pass on it. Apples don;t go very well with lemonade"
Lynn smiles. Rozu walks away.

Narrarator-"And yet, each time she fails."
Rozu-"SHUT UP!" -.- then mumbles "...stupid narrarator.."

[croud laughs]

You see the twins go on stage, they are wearing some form of green peasant wear.

[the croud goes wild]

Twins-"Hey Lynn"
They both lean on oposite sides of the window.
Twins-"wacha up to?'
Lynn-"Oh, hello twins, I'm making Lemonade, want some?'
Hikouru-"Of course!"
Kouru-"count me in too"
She hands both of them a glass of lemonade.
They drink it
Twins-"thanks, see ya"
they leave.

[the light go out]

Narrarator-"As wicked as rozu is, nothing will stop her. She returns to her lair, in a secret room hidden from sight. down some stairs and there it is... the place where she creates her plans to try and get rid of the beautiful maiden Lynn."

[the lights go back on]
[the scene has changed to a dungeon like room, with potions on shelves, a basket of failed plans, a table in the middle of the room, and a mirror on the wall]

Rozu-" Mirror Mirror on the wall, connect to the world wide spider web, to wicked plans dot org'
Mirror-"I'm on it, i'm on it, what ever happened to rhyming?"
Rozu-"shut it, or ill unpin you from the wall and make you fall"
mirror-"yikes, alrighty almight"
[you hear like a computer sound, then go *bing*]
mirror-"you got mail"
Rozu-"shut up! I know! just skip it and go to the homepage"

[crowd laughs]

Rozu-'scrolling, scrolling... WAIT! go back, what was that?"
mirror-"yes your higness, probably just a bug"
Rozu-"this is new, it says it was posted yesterday. hmmm... a potion to cure all your goody too shoes problems. Spray on land in which the victim lives, and monsters shall rise and take them away..."
mirror-"this plan might actually work you highness"
Rozu-"It just might work indeed.... click for women problems, and buy"
mirror-"done and done"

[the lights fade out]

Narrarater-"oh my, I hope this doesnt work. The next morning, in Rozu's lair, a spider comes out of the mirror and leaves a package on the table"

[the light fade back in and theres a package on the table]
[Rozu walks downstairs]

Rozu-"Brilliant! my package has arrived!'

[she opens the package and takes out a bottle]

Rozu-"i know just what I'll do, I'll put this in her watering can for when she waters her rose garden today, and then..."
[she laughs evily]
Rozu-"My plan will start to unfold!!!"

[she turns and heads upstairs with the bottle]
[the lights fade out]

male Narrarator-"so she sneaks over to lynn's house with the bottle tucked away, but read for a quick use of potion action. Her plan ready, shes absolutely certain it'll work this time... What shall happen to our beloved Lynn? "

[a plastic skull hits him in the back of the head, bounces off his head and lands in his arms]

male Narrarater-"ow....Lets get back to the play..."

[the lights fade in]
[scene: Lynn's backyard, theres a water pump, a wateringcan next to it, these two things are next to the small cottage, and quite a few rose bushes on stage]

[out from around the corner of the cittage, you see rozu sneakily dripping the potion into the wateringcan]

[you hear *drip* *drop*]

[the backdoor opens, rozu quickly hides, Lynn comes out of the cottage]

Lynn-"what lovely wheather it is today, I should water my rose garden. Now then, where is my watering can?"
[she turns to the watteringcan]

Lynn-"there it is!"

[she picks it up and fills it with water from the waterpump, you hear the sound of water filling the bucket.]

[Lynn waters her garden and you see shiney glitter come out of the wattering can on to the fake roses]

[croud-"ooo" 'wow thats so pretty"]

[Lynn crouches down and smells one of the roses]
[you see the twins coming from around the other corner of the cottage to talk to lynn]

[lynn pricks her finger on a thorn]
lynn-"Ow!"

[she puts the tip of her finger in her mouth to get rid of any blood... but then passes out on the ground]

the twins-"Lynn!!"

[they start to run to her, but stop because the ground starts shaking]
[you hear a rumbling noise]

[monsters emerge from the rose bushes]

Monsters-" RAWR" and "GROAN"

[the monsters pick up lynn and carry her like shes a rockstar on a crowd]

The twins-"Lyyyynnn!!"

[the monsters carry lynn off the stage around the croud and behind the curtains]
[you hear a few people shreik in the croud]

[the lights fade out]

Narrarator-"INTERMISSION, first of two, you may leave the room to get snacks and drinks from our consession stands outside"


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« Reply #17 on: February 02, 2010, 09:21:59 AM »

Chapter 41~ Intermission #1

The audience leaves to go get snacks, but whats going on backstage?

Everyone is getting ready for scene two of three. The curtain is closed, People are setting up town square.While others are reviewing their lines.
Rozu talks to joufu privately. -keep in mind that they are whispering the entire time-
Rozu-"i have an idea to get this plan going, since you get to be the prince that kisses her and all"
Joufu-"where are you going with this?"
Rozu-"how much do you think she'd mind if we, I dunno.. stole something precious of hers?"
Joufu-"Rozu! your not planning what i think you-'
Rozu-"Joufu, I understand the consequences if this doesn't work."
Joufu-"..."
Rozu-"That was so much fun, planning tricks to get rid of her onstage" shes overly joyed.
Joufu-"yeah?"
Rozu-"I wonder if there is a potion like that, that I can get my hands on"
Joufu-"That would be intresting"


Lynn giggles-"that was so much fun, riding through the croud"
knight-"I bet"
Lynn-"This is so much fun, i can't wait to do the next scene with you"
knight-"me either, but I don't think the role of bad guy suites me very well'
Lynn-"teehee, me either, but your so cute in your evil prince costume"
knight blushes slightly-"you think so?"
lynn-"absolutely"
the twins come over tro them- "that about us?"
Lynn-"you too" she giggles-"in your pesant outfits"
kouru-"lynn..."
hikouru-"we look like freakin elves'
Lynn-"elves are cute though..."
hikouru-"was that supposed to be a compliment, or are you saying we arnt cute?"
kouru-'hikouru, stop being thick headed, of course she means we're cute, isnt that right lynn?"
lynn-"absolutely posetively kouru"
hikouru-"whatever, we're about to go back onstage in a few minutes anyways"
kouru-"hikouru.."
hikouru-"just make sure you don't forget about your lips..." he turns his head, llooking at the stage...
Lynn-'okay' she smiles and tilts her head slightly

stage manager-"oi! lynn, you got a visitor"
Lynn-"really?'
the twins-"what?"
the twins think who could it be...
Lynn goes over to the stage door and into the hallway.
Standing there are ryou and keiichiiro.
Lynn-"Keichiiro! oh and you..."
Ryou-"hey! i have a name you know"
Lynn-"what brings you here?"
Keichiiro-"well, you havn't been at work lately and we've had a few attacks, but our team has pulled through so far"
Lynn-"oh yeah.. i was meaning to tell you that ive been practicing for this play...."
keichiiro-"its okay'
Lynn-"how did you find out anyways?"
Ryou-"knight-kun told us"
Lynn-"aahhh, wheres the rest of my team then?'
keichiiro-"outside, probably heading back in to watch the next scene"
Ryou-"keichiiro, you shoulld go check on them and se if kisu decided to show up"
keichiiro-"alright" he leaves to go check on all that..
Ryou-"lynn'
lynn-"what is it?" she turns and crosses her arms
Ryou-"i'm not going to tell you unless you look at me"
Lynn turns and puts her arms down-"what is it?"
Ryou-"Don't wear that necklace again..."
Lynn-"what? why?! it was a gift!"
Ryou-"because-'
stage manager-"Lynn, get back in here, we are about to start"
Lynn-"alright!" she says to the stage manager.
Lynn-"sorry ryou, you'll have to tell me later, at least stay and watch the rest of the play, okay? got to go"
she turns and walks backstage again.
Ryou sighs.
a voice-"i wonder whats going to happen next"
Ryou looks around. -"Kisu, i know your there"
Kisu-"and? I'm enjoying the show. "
kishu disapears.
ryou goes back to the audience.



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« Reply #18 on: February 02, 2010, 09:26:21 AM »

Chapter 42~ The play pt2

Narrarator-"Rozu's plan had worked, lynn was carried away by monsters! The only ones to witness this... were the twins....'

[the curtains open and the lights go on, the scene is of town square]

Hikouru-"Its a trategy!"
kouru-"Lynn was carried off by monsters!'
hikouru-"Lynn pricked her finger on a thorn"
kouru-"then the demons arrose from the ground below"
hikouru-"and stole our beloves lynn away!!'

there were whispers amoung the croud in the town squeare
-"demons?'
-"our poor lynn"
-"what are we going to do?"

[the lights go out]

Narrarator-"it just so happens that word spread so quickly, that the travelers leaving the town told others. And quickly got to the prince of the castle not far away."

[a spot light goes on to joufu]

Joufu-"They say she is the fairest maiden in all the lands, but where have they taken her. So that I may venture out and save her"

[the spot light goes out and he goes backstage]

Narrarator-" an earthquake shakes the land as a castle emerges from the earth. The castle quickly is covered is vines, monsters guarding the vines onthe inside and out. an opening appears in the vines and the monsters carry lynn inside. The vines quickly close. The monsters carry her to the highest room in the tallest tower and lay her in the bed and go away"


[the lights fade in]
knight enters the stage
Knight-"What a beauty that has been brought to me."

[he sits on the bed and goes across her cheek once withthe back of his hand.]

knight-"beautiful maiden, what is your name?'
"beautiful maiden, what does your eyes look like?"
"beautiful maiden, awaken before me"

[Lynn slowely opens her eyes.]
[then blinks once]

Lynn-"w-who...w-where'

[knight puts one finger over her lips]

Knight-"hush fair maiden, you wil know in due time"
lynn-"b-but.."
knight-"hush"

[he stands and offers her to stand with him]
[she gets out of bed and stands]

Knight-"let us dance"

[the lights go out]

Narrarator-"though in this time, word has spread to the people, that a passerby saw the monsters carry lynn twards the castle, this passerby told the towns people of what he saw. He was summond to the prince to state what he had seen. Only those who were brave enough, ventured out to the castle, through the woods to the vines.
it was a dangerous task... none survived. Though the twins and the prince have survivded so far..."

[the lights go back on]

[scene changed to the woods]

Rozu-"damm her! even when shes gone! I'll just have to do somthing about this"

[the light goes out for a moment]

narrarator-"what could she be planning? could it be a drastic turn of events?'

[the lights go back on]

[the twins enter ffrom the right and prince joufu enters from the left.]

Prince joufu-"who goes there?! are thou enemy or friend?"

The twins-"depends, are you also searching for lynn?"
prince joufu-"that I am'
the twins-"then we are enemys, because from the looks of it your a prince who wants to take lynn from our village once we return with her"

[Rozu suddenly falls from behind one of the trees, she is dressed up like lynn]

the twins-"LYNN!"

[they all go over to rozu]

prince joufu-"is the the fair maiden?'

[the twins squat down beside rozu to see how she doin]

the twins, completely ignoring joufu-"lynn, are you okay? what have they done to you?!'

[some monsters appear on the other end of the stage]

monsters-"RAWRRR"
joufu-"i'll take care of the monsters'

[joufu take out his sword and fights off the monsters]

the twins-"lynn, you've lost your radience. they have deformed your face. you look like that snobby little rich girl rozu"

Rozu-"how dare you! ..whoops.. i mean.." she pretends to pass back out.

the twins-"your not lynn!! Rozu, you snobby little rich girl"

[the twins get up and walk away]

rozu-"wait! your just gunna leave me here?!"

[the prince chases after the twins, the monsters think rozu is lynn escaped and carry her inside]

The twins-"there!follow the monsters with rozu"

[they all run off stage, to back stage]
[the lights go out]

narrarator-"what a clever thing to do twins. But how far will you be able to go? Will you make it on time??"
"INTERMISSION two of two, please head out for some snacks and drinks in our conssession stands outside"


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« Reply #19 on: February 02, 2010, 09:43:38 AM »

Chapter 43~ Intermission #2
lynn-"I always love that part"
kouru-"which part would that be?"
lynn-"when you and hikouru ditch rozu, then use her to gain passage to the castle"
hikouru-"yeah, thats pretty funny"
(i dont know why, but i just want to let everyone know that I'm eating cookies and cream icecream, oh and kisu is watching what goes on backstage during intermission)

Rozu-"joufu, i'll be right back"
Rozu goes over to the stage manager
rozu-"umm, mis stage manager, i dont suppose this is a big deal, but i notaced that lynn has some sort of plastic on her lips, because the light reflects on it on stage, possibly blinding whoever gets near. Shes probably using it to keep from 'actually' kissing anyone on stage"
(the stage manager is the crazy girl class president)
Stagemanager-"this is a big deal! Lynn and joufu would make a really cute couple....err i mean, the last scene is supposed to be uber romantic and passionate, but it would never be like this!"
rozu-"my thoughts exactly...teehee, for both parts, even what you accidently said. I'm sure they'll fall madly inlove after this play"

the stage manager-"Lynn! come here, we have an ergent issue concerning you!"
Lynn-"what?"
the twins-"what does she want?"
lynn-"you can come with me if you want"
the twins-"why not?"

they go over to the stage manager.
stagemanager-"Lynn, you must remove the plastc from your lips at once! its a hazard on stage."
lynn-"a hazard?'
the twins-"What?!!! "
stage manager-"yes, a hazard, the stage lights reflect on it and make it super shiney, you could blind someone"
lynn-"what!! that wasnt a problem before!"
stagemanager-"well i didnt notace it before, but now that i have, i must inform you that u need to take it off now"
lynn-"no, i refuse to take it off"
stagemanager-"you must take it off!"
lynn-"no!"
stagemanager-" i refuse to argue wil you, if you don't take it off, I'll just have to ban you from participating in any future plays, including this one"
lynn and the twins-"what! thats not fair!"
stagemanager-"rules are rules"
lynn-"fine..."

lynn takes the plastic off her lips and hands it to the stage manager.
stagemanger-"thank you"

lynn-"whatever..."
lynn walks away... kinda depressed...
she goes in the hallways and sits against the wall
lynn-"what am i going to do? I cant wear it or ill get in trouble, and if i dont wear it, ill be in even more trouble..."
the twins sit down next to her.
hikouru-"this is terrible, don't you have an extra?'
lynn-'no, and even if i did, im not allowd to wear or i cant participate..."
kouru-"we know, everythings gunna be okay, after the play, hikouru will just have to kiss you."
lynn-"yeah but.....what if kisu's here...."
hikouru-"yeah, what if kishu's here..."
kouru-"then we'll just rescue you again"


kishu appears behind rozu
kishu-"just what are you planning?"
rozu-"thats for me to know and you to find out"
kishu-"how does this play end??"
joufu -"the pr-" rozu covers his mouth.
rozu-"don't tell him, he'll just have to watch and find out, same thing goes with what else is going to happen"
kishu-"whys that"
rozu-"because she'll never love you, she'll love everyone else but you"
kishu-"thats a lie!"
Rozu-"look at all the people she loves, and who'll be next?"
she makes a motion telling him to get closer.
she then whispers in his ear-"jo-u-fu"
kisshu-"your plan will fail rozu, because he doesnt like her, he absolutely hates her"
rozu-"then why'd he protect her?!"
kishu-"because he love you!"
rozu looks shocked then looks at joufu. kisshu disapears.
rozu-"is this true?"
joufu-"yes"
rozu-"i'm sorry, but you know i love kishu."
joufu-"I know"
rozu-"then why?"
joufu-"for you-"

stagemanager-"places people places!"
rozu-"just go through with the plan, thats the least you can do for me"

rozu quickly goes over to where shes supposed to be.

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« Reply #20 on: February 02, 2010, 09:44:30 AM »

Chapter 44~ The play pt3

Narrarator-"the twins and prince joufu are on there way to get you lynn. but what are you doing at this moment?"

[the lights fade on]
[the scene is the highest room in the tallest tower]
[lynn and knight are dancing]

Knight-"fair maiden, what is your name?"
Lynn-"My name is lynn, what is yours?"
knight-"My name is Lord Knight, I am one ofthe many princes of darkness"
Lynn-"where are we lord knight?"
knight-"we are in the highest room in the tallest tower of my castle"
Lynn-"how did I get here?"
knight-"an evil maiden from your village called upon my minions to whisk you away to my castle, where you will become my bride, princess lynn"
Lynn-"your bride? I never agreed to such a thing. Thank you for your hospitality, but I must leave"
knight-"you cannot leave, for there is a labyrinth of thorny vines surrounding my castle, you'll never find your way out"
lynn-"but i liked my life the way it was, I'd rather be spending time with the many friends i have then with you"
knight-"Silence! here, drink this, it seems my servant is here to speack with me"

[he picks up a goblet of 'wine' off the table and hands it to her, he takes one for himself, then heads to the door]
[theres a knock at the door]
[knight opens it and a monster sevant comes in]

monster-"Three people have infultrated the labyrinth, following the ones who have captured your escaped princess"
knight-"escaped princess? my princess is right here! who are these people you speak of?'
monster-"twin peasants, a prince, and a girl that looks exactly like your princess...errr, shes still her?uh oh..."
knight-"leave now and defend the castle!"

[the monster leaves.]
[knighty goes back over to lynn]
knight-"princess lynn, my dear, I must go defend our lovely home from these intruders, until I return, sleep here."
lynn-"sleep here, why cant I go with you?'
knight-"because my dear, we wouldnt want you running away now would we?'
lynn-"why would i run away?"
knight-"sleep my dear, sleep until I return, only my kiss shall wake you, and we'll live peacfully together in eternity"
[he says as he sweeps her off her feet and puts her in her bed]

[he rushes out the door]
[the lights fade out]

narrarator-"oh dear, or precious lynn. she's been captured, and now, she shall sleep for eternity until kissed by another? can the prince or the twins find their way to that room or even defeat that scary prince of darkness? what about rozu? what shall become of her? shall she be shunned from the village? executed? its obvious that the ones she longs for dont like her at all.. "

narrarator-"whats this? our heros fighting?";

[the lights fade in]

prince joufu-"we've made it past the maze"
the twins-"we will be the ones to save her not you!"

[the twins aim their swords at joufu]

prince joufu-"fine, then once I save her, she'll be my queen! "
the twins-"no, you can have rozu! we'll take lynn"
prince joufu-"I can just take her from you once you save her by having you two executed!"
the twins-"you don't even love her, so why are you doing this?!"

[they are sword fighting]

prince joufu-"because, she is the fairest in all the land. And if i can't have her, then noone can!"
the twins-"thats our line!"

[lord kniht appears]

knight-"no, thats my line"

[theres a bunch of darkness flowing about him] (people with black ribbons and a prjector)

[you can hear DUN DUN DUN DUN]

[knight takes out two swords as he floats down from abbove]

[they all start sword fighting]

knight-"she shall be mine and you all shall die!!"

[his minions surround the two opposing forces]
[the twins fight off theres with ease, though prince joufu seem to be having trouble]

kouru-"hikouru, go ahead of me, i shall fight off this evil demon"
hikouru-"but kouru"
[they do a brotherly love thing]
[the girls in the croud go wild]

[knight stabs kouru]
[kouru falls to the floor]
hikouru-"KOURU NO!!!!!!!!!!!!'
kouru-"go, go save lynn, this is what we're here for"
hikouru-"no, I'll never leave you, whats the point in having her if i can't have you too?"
kouru-"because i want you to, i want you to be happy, even without me..'

[kouru dies]
hikouru cries-"kouru! KOURU!!"

[he turns his head to knight]
hikouru-"you... THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!"

[he stands up and lunges at knight]
hikouru-"I'll avvenge my brother!!"
knight-"you can't defeat me! no one can!!!"

[knight stabs hikouru in the arm and legg]
hikouru-"aughhh"

[prince joufu defeats the last of the minions and stabs knight]

knight-"no! I CANNOT BE DEFEATED!!!"

prince joufu-"you there, twin, how can you save lynn if you can't even save your brother or defend yourself?"

[princejoufu walks off stage to backstage, leaving the dying twin behind]

[you see hikouru try to stand and drag his leg walking, which is covered in fake blood, follow joufu off stage]

hikouru-"I will save her for that was my brother's dying wish and because i love her"

[the lights fade out]

narrarator-"prince joufu saw the tower from where they were fighting and decided that would probably be where hes hiding her. and walked up the stairs to her room. hikouru trudged slowely behind him. but what of the lord knight? theres no way he could be killed that easily. Thankfully for him, Rozu was there, she had his minions carry him to a room where his wounds could be treated....but in the mean time, joufu just reached the room"

[the lights fade in]

[joufu comes bursting through the door]
joufu-"fair maiden lynn?"

[he sees her on the bed and goes over to her]

joufu-"Lynn!"

narrarator-"he checks her pulse to see if shes alive"

joufu-":shes definately alive and breathing"

narrarator-"oh but what of the old sayings from fairytales told to children at night, that true loves kiss breaks the spell. or only a prince's kiss can break the spell'

joufu-"I am a prince! maybe a kiss on her delicate lips wil awaken her?"

narrarator-"he stares at her if only for a moment, gazing at her beauty.. he to has fallen inlove with her. he goes in for the kiss"
[joufu is about to kiss lynn]

narrarator-"hikouru unfortunately is a bit late, he just makes it after the kiss"

[joufu kisses lynn]
[hikouru slams the door open and sees whats going on]
hikouru-"Noooooooooooooooo!!"

[hikouru falls to the ground]

narrarator-"his wounds have made him unable to stand, and the fair maiden lynn is now awakening. The kiss has broken the sleeping spell, but there was a second part to the spell, which made lynn fall inlove with the kisser"

lynn-"Prince, what is your name"
joufu-"its Joufu"
lynn-" I love you prince joufu"
Joufu-"As do I love you"

narrarator-"due to the curse, lynn has forgotten everything about her past life. She just then saw hikouru out of the corner of her eye"

[lynn turns and looks at hikouru]
Lynn-"EEEEKKK WHO IS THAT DEAD MAN!!!!!"

[the lights fade out]

Narrarator-"and so hikouru died, losing everything. Prince Joufu and Lynn got marriied. And The prince of darkness knight, and Rozu got married and they all, who lived, lived happily ever after.."

Narrarator-"NOW PLEASE GIVE OUR CAST A ROUND OF APPLAUSE!!"
[croud claps]
[everyones in cast bows]


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« Reply #21 on: February 02, 2010, 09:49:57 AM »

Chapter 45~ afterwords...

alot of people were crying at the end of that play. hikouru and kouru had to answer a few questions to the fans.

kouru-'hikouru you should go after her now, you keep seeming distracted"
kouru say to hikouru quietly. hikouru kept starring over to where you could see backstage, joufu and lynn were together and talking to rozu.


kisshu appears behind rozu.
Kisshu-"now if you don't mind, I'll take her"
Rozu-"no, I mind. Shes joufu's now, and you can't just take a woman from someone of your own kind"
kisshu-"then your taking her from me"
Rozu-'not really, because I'm pretty sure she told you 'i'll never love you' , am i incorrect?"
kisshu-"You were spying on my last battle with her!'
Rozu laughs-"and so what if i was? shes not yours, she rightfully joufu's, so you can't take her"
kisshu-"joufu, hand her over"
rozu-"don't do it"
lynn-"stop fighting"
kisshu-"lynn..."
kisshu goes over to lynn, puts his hands on her shoulders and starts shaking her.
kisshu-"lynn snap out of it! i know you can! You did before! "
Lynn-"kisshu stooopppp itttt"
"your gunna give me whiplash, then i'll have to go to the hospital!"
he stops
kisshu-"I'm sorry..."
"Lynn, please, you can over come this silly little spell! I know you can! Think about when we danced, doesnt that mean anything to you?!"
joufu-"stop it kisshu, your only hurting yourself"
kisshuu gives joufu a mean look and dissapears.
Lynn-"joufu"
joufu looks down at lynn.
He then picks her up wedding style.
Joufu-"lets go"
Rozu and joufu walk out the door and into the hallway.

Ryou counters them, he was on his way to see lynn, so he happened to run into them.

Ryou-"lynn!"
joufu-"get out of the way"
Ryou-"Then hand her over!"
rozu-"no she vital to our plan!'
Ryou-"what plan?"
rozu-"-" (gets interrupted)
joufu-"one that doesnt involve you"


hikouru looks over again.
hikouru-"there gone"
hikouru gets up onto the stage and darts that way.
kouru-"excuse us ladies"
and kouru darts after.
they run in to the hall and see them down the hall. Lynn's hair gives away where shes at.. in joufu's arms
hikouru-"Lynn!"

joufu turns-"oh great"
rozu-"more problems"
hikouru and kouru run twards them.
hikouru-"give her back"
rozu-'no! shes vital to our plans"

joufu and rozu disapear with lynn.
hikouru and kouru slowely stop running.
kouru-"hikouru"
hikouru-'what are you doing here?"
hikouru sees ryou.
Ryou-"I came to talk to lynn, but when i got here, joufu had her, they said something about a plan against kisshu that didnt involve me...who knows, maybe it involves you two"
Ryou turns and walks away.

joufu and rozu return to their dimmension hideout.
joufu goes to his area (from the first time he abducted lynn) and once again lays lynn on that brick table bed thingy in the middle of the floor.
then goes to the edge and sits down.

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« Reply #22 on: February 02, 2010, 09:52:43 AM »

Chapter 46~ tell me tag

Lynn wakes up, then sits up, looking at her surroundings.
Joufu-"why do you allways fall asleep when you come here?"
Lynn-"its a different dimension, one that I'm not used to. I have to adjust"

theres a bit of silence...

Joufu-"is it true?"
Lynn-"is what true?"
joufu-"what kishu said about being able to overcome the spell"
Lynn-"depends, do you want it to be true?"
Lynn gets up, then sits next to joufu. then puts her head on his shoulder.
Lynn-"you don't like me at all do you...then why are you doing this? is it for rozu?"
joufu-"h-how did you know?"
Lynn-"Your eyes may be hipnotizing, but i can see past them. All the times you kept her from trying to kill me, because you knew she'd lose her life probably to kisshu or to that higher up person..what was his name again?"
Joufu-"you mean deepp blue?"
lynn-'yeah, thats the one. I'd like to meet him"
Joufu-"no you dont"
Lynn-"oh? and whys that?"
Joufu-"why would you want to?"
Lynn, cuz hes the 'big boss' , no?"
joufu strts laughing a little bit.
Lynn-"oh, so thats what your laugh sounds like"
joufu-"s-shut up"

Lynn-"so, since I'm apart of this so called 'plan', what is it reallly? like whats it consist of?"
Joufu kisses her on the cheek.
Joufu-"you know I can't tell you that"
Lynn puts her hand on her cheek.
Lynn-"oh really?"

Joufu-"maybe I'll tell you if you can catch me"
he gets up and floats off into the distance a little bit.
lynn-'HEY! No fair!!"
she makes a broom magically appear, then hops on it and chases after him.

they fly past a few random pillars. she loses sight of him, stops and looks around.
Lyn-"now where could he have gone?"
she looks around, then flies off in a different direction.
She passes kisshu, who is sorta hiding behind a pillar, kinda resting and thinking to himself.
Lynn-"joufu!! ...now where could he have disapeared to?"
Kisshu notaced her, then disapears and reapears infront of her. shes looking in a different direction scanning for joufu, so she doesnt notace. she accidently bumps into him.
Lynn-"oof. ah, i should really watch where im going"
she opens her eyes and sees kisshu
Lynn-"Kisshu!"
Kisshu-'Why don't you love me"
Lynn's eyes open wide as she sees hes upset and somewht angry.
Kisshu grabs hold of her neck.
Lynn drops her broom, then tries to take his hands off of her neck.
Lynn-'Kisshu.." she mutters as she starts to fade out of conciousness..
Joufu-"Kisshu let go of her!"
Kisshu-"no! if I can't have her, then noone can!"
joufu disapears then reappears behind kisshu. he hits kisshu, kisshu lets go of lynn to grab at the side of him thats in pain.
Lynn falls...
Joufu-"Lynn!"
Kisshu mutters at the same time-"lynn.."
joufu disapears then reapears shortly lower then lynn. he catches her.
Lynn can barely keep her eyes open.
Lynn mumbles-"tag..i gocha..now you have to telll.....me...."
she passes out.
Joufu disapears with lynn and reapears in his area again and places her down.
but this time he sits on the pillar table thingy that shes laying on.
He looks at her.
and thinks 'its just like in the play..'
he leans closer, then kisses her.
he stops kissing her and her eyes open slowely
she turns to the side and starts caughing rapidly.
she takes a few deep breathes
Lyn-"thankyou for saving me"
she hugs him.


else where, rozu's comin up with a plan...
Rozu goes to the black magic club and buys a love potion.....



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« Reply #23 on: February 02, 2010, 09:53:32 AM »

Chapter 47~ here, have some tea...

Lynn-" alright, I gotcha, now you have to tell me"
joufu-'I can't tell you"
Lynn-"why not? you said you would'
joufu-"cuz you cheated'/
lynn-"what! you never said any rules, so how could i cheat?"
joufu-"you just did"
lynn-"what?!"
joufu-"....why did you do that?"
lynn-"do what?'
joufu-"why did you let him try to kill you?"
lynn-"oh that...." she lokks to the side at the ground.
he pushes her bangs out of her eyes.
lynn-"he caught me by surprize..."


elsewhere....
ryou goes and tells keiichiiro what happened.
Ryou-"that helpless girl got herself captured again"
keiichiiro-"she should be fine, she was before wasnt she?"
Ryou-"only this time, i think she wasnt wearing that plastic on her lips during the kiss scene at the end of that play"
knight-"i have a feeling that shes trying to find out what they are up to'
ryou-"whered you come from'
knight-"over there" he points to the school.
they are on their way back to the cafe hideout
ryou-"well all we know is that joufu and rozu are using lynn for a plan against kisshu..."
keiichiiro-"ryou, did you get to tell her about the necklace?"
ryou-"I was about to, but then she had to go back onstage. so i was going to finish telling her after the play, but she was kidnapped"
knight-"about what necklace?"
keiichiiro-"the one that ryou found, iff lynn wears it and is kissed, she'll turn into a kitten"
knight-"interesting..."


hikouru and kouru are in their classroom, alone with each other.
hikouru-"I could have saved her"
kouru-"hikouru...don't beat yourself up over it..."
hikouru-"..."
Rozu walks in
Rozu-"I hope I'm not interrupting something"
hikouru stands-"where is lynn!"
rozu-"I suppose your hikouru then"
hikouru-"Answer me!"
Rozu-"shes fine, shes safe with joufu right now."
hikouru-"tsk" he brings his head back and turns his head to the side, clenching his fists. "thats what i was afraid of..."
rozu-"here, have some tea, I'm sure it'll do you some good."
she puts the tray of tea on a desk.
rozu-"i suppose I'm not wanted here, so I guess i'll just leave"
hikouru-'you aren't leaving until you return lynn"
rozu-"then i guess i'll stay" she sits in a chair
kouru-"give us back lynn'
rozu-"I cannot do that right now"
hikouru-"why not"
rozu-"please have some tea before it gets cold"
rozu gets up and hands them both a cup of tea.
kouru-"did you do anything to it?"
rozu-"not at all, its my first ttime making tea, so it might taste a bit odd..."
hikouru takes a sip. kouru pretends to take a sip.
kouru-"your right it does tase odd"
hikouru-'what is this?"
kouru-"hikouru?"
rozu walks over to hikouru
hikouru-'what have you done?!'
kouru-"hikouru!! you actually drank it didnt you?!"
rozu puts her arms around his neck and kisses him.
kouru stands up.
kouru-"Get away from him!!!"
hikouru-"Rozu..." he gets on one knee and takes her hand. "I am your slave"
he kisses her hand "of love"
kouru-"NO! Hikouru! you don't love heer! you love lynn!!"
rozu-"I see who the brains are in this twin relationship'
kouru-"shut up! he was just so furiated he couldnt think straight!'
kouru walks over and slaps hikouru



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« Reply #24 on: February 02, 2010, 09:55:06 AM »

48 coming soon....
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« Reply #25 on: February 02, 2010, 09:55:45 AM »

49...coming after 48....
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« Reply #26 on: February 02, 2010, 10:00:04 AM »

50...after 49...
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« Reply #27 on: February 02, 2010, 10:00:54 AM »

51....
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« Reply #28 on: February 02, 2010, 10:02:12 AM »

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« Reply #29 on: February 02, 2010, 10:09:55 AM »

~PAGE THREE

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