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Lovely Heart (Original Fanfic)
« on: December 23, 2009, 02:07:36 am »
Okie its an original fanfic about romance and love in school. Haven't written fanfics in a while and wow it felt great. Please let me know what you think about them. A writer always likes to hear feedback and comments even if they may be bad. I kind of have an idea where this story is leading to but we'll see...^^

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Life could never be better for Shingo Date. He has a wonderful loving mother, an idiot but understanding older brother and a comfortable home. He may not be wealthy but he was surrounded with love by his friends and his family. His father and grandfather passed away in a tragic accident a few years ago and he still misses them. However he decided long ago he would not cry over it. He had to be strong for the family.

He was an eternal optimist and always had a smile on his face which earned him many friends and also admirers as he was quite cute. But he felt something missing in his life. He felt an emptiness in his heart that seemed to eat away at him slowly. He could not figure out what it was but unknown to him, it would tear away his happiness, his smile and his life. This is the story of how Shingo found the meaning of love....... ......... ........... .......

The sun was especially bright that day though it was not especially hot. Together with the gentle soothing breeze that came now and then, it made the day especially lovely. School was the same as usual and it was halfway through History class.
“Alright everyone! We’re having a test on the Sengoku period next monday. Please take it seriously and anyone that gets an A will get a surprise!”
Oh i hope its something good Shingo thought to himself.
“Eehhh i bet Miss Mika won’t give us anything. Its just a trick i tell you! A trick to get us to study. But i ain’t falling for that no way.!”
Beside Shingo sat one of his best buddy Reiji. He was the type of guy that’s skeptical about everything and cares mostly about himself. It was probably why he did not have that many friends. Shingo however was an exception. Reiji found something in Shingo that he found in no other.

“Even so Reiji, a test is a test and we should do our best!” Shingo told him with his smile and cheerful voice. He looked at Shingo and sighed. “There you go again with that smile and sweety-pie look. I bet you want the surpirse to be Miss Mika cuddling and giving a big wet kiss eh?”

Shingo’s face went as red as cherry. “W-what are you talking about? You’re being an idiot. Besides i know you act all indifferent but i know YOU like her alot! Hehehehehe....”
“N-no i don’t! Cut it out! Reiji began turning red as well.
“Hehehehehe awww don’t be shy Reiji. Its okay to like Miss Mika. I think all the boys in the school like her aaaaand i think some girls too.....”
Miss Mika was in fact really popular because she had a very curvaceous figure and a gorgeous face. Her breasts were, you could say ‘D’-elightful.

Later on the final bell rang and school ended for the day. “Hey Shingo, Reiji wait up” A boy with yellow hair came running up to them at the hallway as they left the classroom.
“Yo blondie!” Reiji greeted him. “Why’d you have to keep calling me that?” The boy with wavy blond hair said as he rolled his eyes. Just then a couple of girls that walked by looked at him and giggled amongst themselves. “You sure are popular with the ladies Harry.” Shingo said as he noticed the girls still giggling and turning back now and then to look at him giggling even harder.

Harry Asahi was their good friend from another class. He was really popular with the girls because of his blonde hair, blue eyes and handsome features. He was tall and slender and had the looks of a pop idol. He was really smart too and was approached by the president of the student council to join but he turned the offer down saying it was too much of a hassle.

“Hehe its cos my blonde hair. If i didn’t have it, i’d just be a regular guy.” He said modestly.
“Oh really? If that’s the case i’m gonna dye my hair blonde. Then i can become the prince of this school and all the girls would be lining up to be my princess.” Reiji said with a hint of sarcasm.
“Even if your hair is black, blonde or white you’d still be an idiot.” Harry told him.
“Oh yeah i’ll shave your head till your baldness shines like a mirror!”
“Good then i’ll let you look into my bald-headed mirror to see how ugly you are!”
Shingo just sighed and rolled his eyes as the two continued to argue.
“Haha they at it again Shingo?” Came a female voice to his right.
Shingo turned and saw a girl walking towards him. She had bobbed hair and pretty features. “Ahh Reiko.Yeah same old same old. Haha.”
“Hey the tomboy is here. Now that the gang’s all present we sh- Gaah!”
Reiko punched him in the face before he could finish.
“Lets go!” She smiled

The four of them usually spend most of their time together after school. These three were Shingo’s best friends. Although Reiko had known Shingo since they were kids. They were childhood friends and were in the same class from middle school till high school. This year however, she was in a different one.

“So what’s the plan for today?” Reiji asked as he rubbed his cheek where Reiko had hit him. “I dunno, what do you wanna do Shingo?” Reiko turned to Shingo. He replied instantly. “Lets eat hamburgers! I’m starving.” He said. Then his stomache gave a little growl.

And the gang left the school together and went to the fast food restaurant that just opened a few weeks ago. Shingo felt really happy and good whenever the four of them were together like this. He felt a strong bond between all 3 of them. It was as if they were like family. Sure they may quarrel and annoy him sometimes but the chain that holds them together remain strong. They were tight. It puzzled him sometimes though how each of them had contrasting personalities but could still be attracted to each other.

The day became less brighter as the clouds came rolling in and covering its light. The soothing breeze intensified making the day very windy and cooling.
All of a sudden a particular strong wind rushed by blowing away scraps of litters and leaves everywhere.
“Aaaah my ribbon!” Came the voice of a girl as a bright red ribbon came flying at Shingo.
It flew at him and was almost out of reach when his hands shot up like a gun and caught it safely.
“*whistle* Nice catch Shingo.” Reiji said.
“Ahh my ribbon.” The girl repeated but this time with relief. The girl’s chestnut-colored hair was long and smooth as it floated on the wind. He looked at her as he returned the ribbon back and saw that she wore the same uniform as them.

“Ah Suzuka.” Shingo exclaimed as he realised who it was. His heart began beating faster and his legs quivered slightly as the realization hit him. His face tighten up and he just stood there awkwardly.
“Thanks Shingo! Nice catch!” She smiled and took back the ribbon.

“Whoa what’s up with Shingo? He looks like he’s constipated.” Harry said as he looked at Shingo. “Nah he looks more like he’s about to rape some poor little child that he kidnapped from the supermarket.” Reiji added as he examined Shingo’s expression.
“Poor little girl.” Harry said sympathetically.
“Naaah. Looking at him, i’d say he’d go both ways. If it turns out to be a boy, then he’d really deserve my pity.” Reiji told him.
“What the hell is wrong with you guys?” Reiko said exasperatedly and rolled her eyes.
“Shingo likes Suzuka you idiots.”
“Ohhhhhhh” They both turned to each other and then at Reiko.
“Aren’t you jealous? That harpy has gotten Shingo under her spell! You should stop her.”
Reiji told her.
“T-that’s stupid. I’m not jealous! And don’t call her a harpy. I cant believe you guys didn’t know Shingo liked Suzuka. I’ve known since the start of the year.”

Suzuka was busy tying her hair and hadn’t yet realised the weird look Shinji had.
Harry elbowed his ribs and he came to his senses albeit painfully.
“I’ll take the other two off first and we’ll meet you at the place ok? Just be cool and be yourself. If she doesn’t like you  then there’s always others out there yea?” He whispered to Shingo. “Remember, relax. Girls like their guys to be confident and strong. You’ll be fine!” And with that, the three left though the other 2 had to drag Reiji with them because he insisted on staying to help Shingo which they believed would be more disastrous than helpful.

Okay, be cool and confident. You’re the man Shingo. Be a man!
He stared into her eyes. Those enchanting brown eyes that seemed to pull him in.
“Do you want to go watch a movie with me this Saturday?” She asked him.
Huh? Wow my seduction technique worked he thought to himself beaming inside.
“Uhh Shingo? Why’re you smiling so widely?” Suzuka asked puzzled.
“Ehh....Aaahh...Well it’s nothing! I’m always smiling! I love to smile! Heehee!” He replied.
*Giggle* “Yeah thats true. Everytime i look at you i always see a smile there. I’ve never seen you angry or sad.” She told him with a look of slight admiration.
Shingo blushed. “So do you wanna watch a movie with me this Saturday?”
She asked again. Wow she looked really cute when she said.
Should I or Shouldn’t I? What am i going to talk about? What if i look stupid? What if i did something to annoy her? Should i go? He thought to himself.
Be a man! “Yes ok!”
But i being poor, have only my dreams. I've spread my dreams under your feet. Tread softly, for you tread on my dreams....

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Re: Lovely Heart (Original Fanfic)
« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2009, 02:25:43 am »
Nice one^^
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« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2011, 07:01:08 pm »
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People said that since July 2007 has, Gongyi City, Clay comeback, the new clay brick production plant 15, is built of two. These brick swallowed basic farmland, more than 1,000 acres of farmland, deforestation hundreds of acres. These companies cover the name of new wall materials, clay brick production. </P> <p> Mr Wong said: The results not only does not ban, but added 16 last March to December, we went to reflect the City Construction Committee and the Land Board are 'Gongyi City was in 2007 finished off Clay Factory' to stall. Zhengzhou seven departments To check, January 9, Gongyi City Land Bureau, Construction Committee in advance of these clay brick plant downtime, meet the inspection. / p> <p> 20 日 8 时 20 points, led by Fan reporter in the village down to the south side of State Road 310 r. Town High damiaocun. The town has Clay Factory 5. </P> <p> old paradigm that these factory owners are closely connected, has five or six people every day in the brick factory on patrol outside the village, unable to enter the brick. Reporters climbed up a brick factory west slopes, observed in the top of the hill, the north end there is a brick kiln door of the kiln 30, in the middle with a large excavator digging, further south, about dozens of acres of air drying the field blank rows of brick, brick carrying a few people are sent to dry loading blank field. </P> <p> 40 minutes later, the reporter went to another brick. In the plant, two excavators are digging, piling up a site burnt clay brick. </P> <p> Reporters looking for kiln no, the old Fan said: one meter long tunnel kiln. </P> <p> nearly 11 when the reporter arrived Dayugou Yuhuangmiao, unannounced visits to the villagers under the leadership of Haomou a clay brick plant. In the brick, the reporter saw just released from the tunnel kiln is firing out of clay, more than 10 workers were loading. Hao Mou said: </P> <p> insiders who said the brick had no money on the demolition of the umbrella who </p> <p> afternoon, reporters look for a few insiders. Howard told a reporter that he had a friend before the plant is dry clay, because he wanted above mouth annually to 300,000, he is too stingy, not long after he demolished a brick on. </P> <p> another brick factory boss of anonymity, said: also sent several hundred thousand dollars there to protect these people, this amount of money in the brick (the boss) eyes of the considered Gesha? Ermao 1989, nearly 300% profit every day selling 200,000 a year on more than ten million. new wall cost a dime eight, nine also can not sell to sell a hair and now the city's 13 new wall materials enterprise-wide went out, clay brick manufacturing plant is in full swing with. </P> <p> Mr. Secretary of Gongyi city in North Village are building official Bauhinia Garden District, due to pre-build six residential buildings by using a new type of wall, and acceptance of people to the site director, said then that brick is not to acceptance. Helpless, in the construction of seven residential buildings, the Division has used Mr. Clay. </P> <p> interview was hailed blocked bypass to get rid of tracking camera cable car </p> <p> 13:00, reporters, led by the villagers set up 5 km along a dedicated wire, came with Yanshi Hill Township store at the junction of the Southern Oil Kang Zhen Yelingcun. Villagers pointed wires, said: secretary of the shares of 300 million, is the largest shareholder. </P> <p> correspondent then went to Du Fu Zhen Kang cemetery 500 meters across, the villagers came to a brick pointing south. Two large excavators digging in the soil, a few trucks back and forth, and some bricks are being installed. Observation, the villagers quickly reminded reporters to leave, saying the brick town clerk into a dry stock. Reporters taken immediately after the leave. </P> <p> Reporters traveling on the bus just 200 meters, two men dressed in gray overalls riding a motorcycle, get in the car before reporters. Then, a middle-aged women pushing Zhang Yu-long iron stand in front of the car. Two men, said: Reporters rushed to the Police. Flat head man Lakaijumen, ordered reporters off and hand over the camera. This person cell phone, let reporters talk to the brick factory, the reporter insisted to the town government. At this time, 110 police patrol team arrived with two, flat head man more arrogant: not live. within the division. </P> <p> correspondent bypass more than 40 kilometers, came to Chicago to feed franca Village. </P> <p> village brick chimney is not high three smoky. The villagers said: Farmland </P> <p> Nishimura mayor in the Village, a 60 mu of basic farmland occupied by the clay brick plant is under construction. </P> <p> correspondent found that black cars have been tracking the modern sport utility vehicle, the reporter out, leave the Gongyi City. </P> <p> authorities according to the law area of ​​law </p> <p> Yesterday, the reporter interviewed Clay rectification provincial office staff contact Mr. Wang. He said the clay in and outside of the Yellow River is absolutely not allowed to produce. Masses, and if the investigation finds that the production is Clay, are eliminated. </P> <p> Provincial Office of Kwok Se dried brick, deputy director, told reporters for the Clay rebound, the second half of last year, made three consecutive files, consolidate control results. There are many departments in our province this a common regulation, the implementation of the linkage mechanism. Illegal land by the land department for investigation. </P> <p> Provincial Department of Land Information Office, Mr Lee in an interview with reporters yesterday, said:

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Re: Lovely Heart (Original Fanfic)
« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2011, 10:18:32 am »
Cheap Louis Vuitton HandbagsLouis VuittonCheap Louis Vuitton WalletsLouis VuittonCheap Louis Vuitton BagsLouis VuittonLouis Vuitton Men's HandbagsLouis VuittonLouis Vuitton HandbagsLouis VuittonDu Fu's hometown near the brick factory is expanding this <br> clay loading shipped overseas <br> correspondent unannounced visits were stopped <br> <p> core Tips </p> <p> correspondent recently received several complaints from the masses, Clay Factory of Gongyi City, said a lot of new wall materials under the guise of the name, essentially banned the production of solid clay brick country. They said that these plants have the background. </P> <p> unannounced visits to eight reporters the day before yesterday brick, brick actually found some of the basic farmland construction. </P> <p> complaints from the masses more than 1,000 acres of arable land Clay comeback </p> <p> 1 19, this reporter received more than 7 towns of Gongyi City, the masses of complaints. People said that since July 2007 has, Gongyi City, Clay comeback, the new clay brick production plant 15, is built of two. These brick swallowed basic farmland, more than 1,000 acres of farmland, deforestation hundreds of acres. These companies cover the name of new wall materials, clay brick production. </P> <p> Mr Wong said: The results not only does not ban, but added 16 last March to December, we went to reflect the City Construction Committee and the Land Board are 'Gongyi City was in 2007 finished off Clay Factory' to stall. Zhengzhou seven departments To check, January 9, Gongyi City Land Bureau, Construction Committee in advance of these clay brick plant downtime, meet the inspection. / p> <p> 20 日 8 时 20 points, led by Fan reporter in the village down to the south side of State Road 310 r. Town High damiaocun. The town has Clay Factory 5. </P> <p> old paradigm that these factory owners are closely connected, has five or six people every day in the brick factory on patrol outside the village, unable to enter the brick. Reporters climbed up a brick factory west slopes, observed in the top of the hill, the north end there is a brick kiln door of the kiln 30, in the middle with a large excavator digging, further south, about dozens of acres of air drying the field blank rows of brick, brick carrying a few people are sent to dry loading blank field. </P> <p> 40 minutes later, the reporter went to another brick. In the plant, two excavators are digging, piling up a site burnt clay brick. </P> <p> Reporters looking for kiln no, the old Fan said: one meter long tunnel kiln. </P> <p> nearly 11 when the reporter arrived Dayugou Yuhuangmiao, unannounced visits to the villagers under the leadership of Haomou a clay brick plant. In the brick, the reporter saw just released from the tunnel kiln is firing out of clay, more than 10 workers were loading. Hao Mou said: </P> <p> insiders who said the brick had no money on the demolition of the umbrella who </p> <p> afternoon, reporters look for a few insiders. Howard told a reporter that he had a friend before the plant is dry clay, because he wanted above mouth annually to 300,000, he is too stingy, not long after he demolished a brick on. </P> <p> another brick factory boss of anonymity, said: also sent several hundred thousand dollars there to protect these people, this amount of money in the brick (the boss) eyes of the considered Gesha? Ermao 1989, nearly 300% profit every day selling 200,000 a year on more than ten million. new wall cost a dime eight, nine also can not sell to sell a hair and now the city's 13 new wall materials enterprise-wide went out, clay brick manufacturing plant is in full swing with. </P> <p> Mr. Secretary of Gongyi city in North Village are building official Bauhinia Garden District, due to pre-build six residential buildings by using a new type of wall, and acceptance of people to the site director, said then that brick is not to acceptance. Helpless, in the construction of seven residential buildings, the Division has used Mr. Clay. </P> <p> interview was hailed blocked bypass to get rid of tracking camera cable car </p> <p> 13:00, reporters, led by the villagers set up 5 km along a dedicated wire, came with Yanshi Hill Township store at the junction of the Southern Oil Kang Zhen Yelingcun. Villagers pointed wires, said: secretary of the shares of 300 million, is the largest shareholder. </P> <p> correspondent then went to Du Fu Zhen Kang cemetery 500 meters across, the villagers came to a brick pointing south. Two large excavators digging in the soil, a few trucks back and forth, and some bricks are being installed. Observation, the villagers quickly reminded reporters to leave, saying the brick town clerk into a dry stock. Reporters taken immediately after the leave. </P> <p> Reporters traveling on the bus just 200 meters, two men dressed in gray overalls riding a motorcycle, get in the car before reporters. Then, a middle-aged women pushing Zhang Yu-long iron stand in front of the car. Two men, said: Reporters rushed to the Police. Flat head man Lakaijumen, ordered reporters off and hand over the camera. This person cell phone, let reporters talk to the brick factory, the reporter insisted to the town government. At this time, 110 police patrol team arrived with two, flat head man more arrogant: not live. within the division. </P> <p> correspondent bypass more than 40 kilometers, came to Chicago to feed franca Village. </P> <p> village brick chimney is not high three smoky. The villagers said: Farmland </P> <p> Nishimura mayor in the Village, a 60 mu of basic farmland occupied by the clay brick plant is under construction. </P> <p> correspondent found that black cars have been tracking the modern sport utility vehicle, the reporter out, leave the Gongyi City. </P> <p> authorities according to the law area of ​​law </p> <p> Yesterday, the reporter interviewed Clay rectification provincial office staff contact Mr. Wang. He said the clay in and outside of the Yellow River is absolutely not allowed to produce. Masses, and if the investigation finds that the production is Clay, are eliminated. </P> <p> Provincial Office of Kwok Se dried brick, deputy director, told reporters for the Clay rebound, the second half of last year, made three consecutive files, consolidate control results. There are many departments in our province this a common regulation, the implementation of the linkage mechanism. Illegal land by the land department for investigation. </P> <p> Provincial Department of Land Information Office, Mr Lee in an interview with reporters yesterday, said:

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